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“Okay! See you later when I get home!” he called as the clock tower rang, leaving a pair of girls waving as they headed opposite ways. Buildings blurred as he dashed farther from the village where he lived and watched as his home shrank along the sun setting horizon.
Long branches pulled at his clothes, slapped against his chest, scratching and scraping his skin as he pushed through the thick forest between his home and his mentor. For five of the many hours in a day, he went to train. One hour with the officials and then he snuck past the bo